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I do have reasons for not updating wish I could share some of them with you all but unfortunately I can't but hopefully I can say something soon tho 😔🙂

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Am I back to regular updates unfortunately not I don't know it's February and it's the month of love and because I love you guys here is an update.

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Any way I think I have kinda said a lot already now let's get to this review
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Genre: Thriller // Suspence

Author: EpicTalesOnly

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

First off the people who your choose to illustrate your characters look good I think the would fit really well with your book.

  Your first chapter hmmmm
I'm your first chapter the punctuations in some paragraphs where a little bit excessive some weren't even supposed to be there.
  Oh and the word / sentences that are said or written in another language I would advise that you give a little bit of translation you could open a little bracket by the side and write the translation preferably in another font .

Ok your second chapter was mostly written in that other language that wasn't English and that got me lost because I don't understand what the character says
   Most readers on here there first language is English and for you to write a book on here I kinda feel like the readers who don't understand the foreign language on there should at least get a translation I don't think that would be to hard.

Your last chapter is the only chapter that was in English through out and that was great but the rest of the chapters need to be worked on that is with translations especially the second chapter.
   I don't really have an issue with your paragraphing I like them .

Just your punctuations and your translations.

Not really a fan of your book cover
What is the concept behind it ??.

Your book description hands down is the best part of this book ngl it just felt real you know but then your chapters is  where the confusion begins😭.

To my readers
   Would I say you all should check This book out maybe not now probably when the project has been completed and some of the words here translated but if you still wanna check it out that is if you would understand the language then why not.

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This book can be found in my reading list "Books I have reviewed"

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