Happy new month you all it's December 😝😝I posted a chapter yesterday hope and you all engaged so here I am 😌 writing another chapter for you all.
    It's currently the second of December and it's past nine.
     Writing this and listening to Adele's (send my love (to your new lover).
     Not much to yap about today tho so let's just get to this review

Ok there is something to yap about I'm pretty sure I have said this before but I'm gonna say it again I don't review more than a book per author ❤️
   Simply because I think everyone should get a single review just because you have another doesn't mean I have to review it and for those who ask me to choose which one to review (Child it's not my book it's yours make your choice).
    Unless maybe the book is kinda a Collab (meaning you wrote that book with another author) I might consider.
     I hope I have cleared the air 😃😃

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Author: TheRaeOfSunshine1

Genre: Romance

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

First of your book description started off really good some minor errors on there but that can kinda be worked on later on no pressure.
   For your book cover I kinda feel like it's not matching the plot I don't know.

Ok using Sabrina and Jacob as your main characters was a really bold step 😭
    Ngl your prologue was really good 😌 and really calming to read
   With the way your prologue went I kinda felt like your book might kinda be different but it's kinda the same I mean first of i felt like their meeting was kinda to soon I mean it was the first day.
     And she was already blushing and thinking about him I mean come on why not slow the plot a little bit I mean

Oh your punctuations where all over the place like in lots of paragraphs that can also be worked on because your book hasn't got they much chapters yet so editing would definitely be easy.
   Personally I think your book started of at a goot start(prologue)and then the rest where some what out of place .
   
My advice take some time,have a strong plot,edit and don't rush updates❤️

To my readers:

    Yes even after criticizing I would still day you all check this book out I hope you all enjoy tell the author what you think about their book because I'm sure they would love to know.
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  Hope you all enjoyed this review.

And you all dont for get I posted an announcement on my message board do make sure you check it out and also read the beginning of this chapter for those who ask for reviews.
    Have a great day I guess

Ps: I rewatched frozen one and two yesterday and lemme just say frozen one is still so good 😭 still haven't watched wicked but I have watched Moana 2 and it was one in a million

                                 ~Lonleyloner2007❄️🌫️