Um hi🌚

So last review was two days ago and now I'm here because I mean I have to give you all something to start of the week am I right.
   Gosh I have been so lazy for no reason lately and that's so annoying.
    Do you all know
Flo they are like this girl group and I must say they are doing real good at the moment I mean their album was like do good I mean it's an r & b album so it's meant to be fit I mean who doesn't love RnB
    What is you all favorite RnB artist

Oh and how can I forget I have been watching The good doctor on Netflix for like a day now and I must say that is some good as series I'm currently in season 2 now I would eventually need some recommendations after watching them lemme know if you all have any recommendations now let's get to this Review.

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Author:shalosalt03

Genre:

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

I actually don't know the genre because I can't remember what genre the author told me or if they even told me so yeah but let's get to this review.

I'm gonna say this in the nicest way that is not a book description 😃it looks like something your wrote so something would be there and that's sad I feel like if you accurately want to write a book you should have a good/strong plot,good book description and a good book cover.
    Your book description is quite poor like literally 😃you need to work on that.

Your first chapter 😃hmmmmmmm
That was a little bit rushed don't you think and the chapter was quite short although your spacing was quite good but still that first chapter was just all over the place.
   Same as the second chapter 🤔
How strong do you think your plot is

Punctuations also was a little bit all over the place that also needs to be revisited.
  As of now I don't think your plot is strong you would eventually hit writers block to soon and that might make you quit writing.

Like I said before work on getting a better plot,Revise that book description,your book cover could be better but for now it might work.

To my readers:

You know I would always tell you all to read the books I review and right now I want you all to read and give the author your own opinion about this book.

Comments are quite needed and I'm sure you all would have some stuff to say don't forget to vote that makes every author happy so do that.

Vote for this chapter like rn I'm waiting 😃😃
Comment I love to read your comments and I always reply.
Like I said earlier I need Netflix recommendations 😔
Hope you all are having a great day it's almost midnight so I'm gonna publish this now so technically it's still Sunday 😌😌

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