Hey you all hope you all have been enjoying the reviews that have been coming.

Oh and it seems some of you all that requests for reviews don't read them I feel like you just want one because tell me why I legit take time going through some books even tho they are mid and I make a statement and I post it and all you can say is thanks not saying it's bad tho but come on baby it's your book stand by it the places where you feel like I'm wrong correct me defend your work don't be freaking lazy that's boring and you don't even vote on your review chapter.
  
   I mean come on your better than that
I always say comment when necessary because there are some places I want you to comment make me feel like I wrote something wrong 🙄don't just accept what I say I might be wrong to you know.

Sigh it's quite sad
   Let's get to today's review shall we

Before I forget review requests for December have officially been closed 🤚😃any other requests coming in now might most likely be ignored unless I reply you 😃😃.
Now on to the review

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Author: zozoyo_157

Genre: Fiction

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:
  First of in your book description the first paragraph made sense but as I continued reading I guess I just got lost because I didn't understand anything from there but like you said give the book a Chance and I did.
    Now let's talk about your chapters
For the first chapter/part the beginning felt like you added a kind of prologue there let's skip that.
   Yuu where using this punctuation mart quite a lot ' and your spacing is quite 😃you need to work on that and I was quite surprised when I found out your book wasn't written like a normal novel would.

It was written more in a play form which looks nice even tho I'm not a huge fan of books written like that.
   Feel like there was a lot of misuse of punctuations.
   And that should also be worked on probably during final editing.
     Your chapter length where quite short but I think that may some how be over looked because it wasn't written in a novel format.

To my readers:
  Hey you all this was supposed to be released since but I didn't quite complete this review but I'm done now hope you all enjoy it vote comment and have fun reading.

You all can find this book on my reading list with the rest of my other reviewed books
  
Follow me vote comment you all it's Christmas and I feel like you all left I mean we have few interactions now and that kinda sucks but oh well

Have a great day you all

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