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LORENA: coming of age

Moana 2 just came out😭ughhhhh ok I take back what I said about November.
    Just so you all know I have been writing most of you all's review and lemme just say updates are coming calm ur tits🚶.
     So I'm writing this chapter and listening to Latto's album you all go stream like right now.

Oh and I been on YouTube lately I think it's fun over there.
    I don't know how long this reviews gonna be but anyway hope you all enjoy this one as much as I enjoyed reading and reviewing.

Anyway like I said before could you all be telling me the time when you all be getting my reviews 🌚
    And maybe tell me where you are reading it

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Author: simplybunniesx

Genre: Teen fic

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

Ok first offf your character aesthetics are really nice how do you all make them tho ?
     Your book description is like really plain I don't know for a coming of age book I feel like it should entail more that description is just blank 🤷
     And for your book cover not really a fan of it i get that they are supposed to represent 3 of your characters but it doesn't just fit and feel right that could be worked on I'm sure there would be a suitable and more enticing book cover.

Ok I know I usually be like oh we need longer chapters but yours😭the first chapter was so long feel like it could be split into two chapters or sum.
    Tho I must actually say you really did good for writing that much words I mean how many words was written only in chapter 1 ??
   
  Your chapters where actually written in a very beautiful way your paragraphs and spacing definitely a 10 on that for your punctuations there where some little mistakes here and there but they could be cleared when you are doing final edition.

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To my readers:

Hello my little what do I call you all😂
    Any way here with another review hope you all like this one check this book out it's ongoing but still give it a try because why not 🤷.

Follow me because you because one of my.  (What do I call you all)Vote comment and I hope you enjoy your stay here.
     Ummmmm we are almost at 5k reads and we already hit 2k voted when I say I love you all .

This book can be found in my reading list "Books I have reviewed"

Anyway that's all for now have a nice day you all.
  Don't forget to tell me the time and where you all are reading this chapter/my reviews.

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                                     ~Lonleyloner2007🎄💚

    

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