Golden sunlight
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So this review is for an amazing supporter 🙂↔️I'm glad I'm reviewing your book and I hope you enjoy this one.
Im actually writing this on tuesday yep still feeling sleepy but I gotta do this I can do this yesss I can.
No I can't 🥲🥲I'm gonna faint(jk).
Anyway you all should give me idea of questions I can ask you all or you can simply just asked me questions I don't mind unless it's dumb or I genuinely don't want to reply.
I tried studying and listening to nature sounds and funny enough I actually grabbed sum little bit here and there(I'm still on my gap year).
Let's hop on to this review before that Kai cenants live stream ended in the 30th although I never watched it but I felt like it was fun and he even invited my wife(SZA)
Sorry on to this review I'm gonna yap later.
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Author Naume07
Genre: Science fiction // Fiction
Status: Ongoing
My thoughts:
Ehem ehem
First of for some who said it's their first time making a character aesthetics I think you did just fine I mean I can even make one of those.
Your prologue was really good at some point I was confused because if the war was going on in Africa why was there chaos in times square but then it click it's like an international crisis.
Most new authors usually have issues with either paragraphs or punctuations and it seems like there where some errors with some punctuations a some certain paragraphs some punctuations weren't necessary.
Felt like the " was a little bit overused oh and where you where supposed to use the comma because there was a continuation you ended it with a full stop started ended with a full stop and did it again that wasn't quite right.
Oh I must say your book cover is truely magnificent that I must say.
Now for your book title could you go in details how it goes with your book ?
What was the inspiration behind this book and what made it all just click that this was gonna be your book title ?
Ok your book description is screaming drama now that is how you write a book description I like how that was executed.
To my readers:
What are you all waiting for go read that book because I'm sure you all are going to enjoy it.
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Hope you all enjoy this book
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