Hasn't it been kinda interesting now that November is coming to an end I mean.
   Kendrick released his album and my woman was on there I mean and she totally devoured(in talking about SZA).The album is goated tho.
    Khalid got outed🤚😭
   SZA and lizzo went on Kais life stream 🥲we might get sos deluxe next month.
   I like November(I'm kidding).

It's Sunday and I'm writing this review I should probably post this on Tuesday that is if the last chapter gets to a certain view and vote count 😗😃.
   
Now let's get to this review I mean I'm not x review time 😃
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Author:introvertismyself

Genre: Romance // Fantasy

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

First off we are supposed to get the introduction before we get an actual chapter it just feels wierd reading the first chapter and then reading the introduction.
   It can be edited tho I hope you change that ,your choice of characters ummm hello those are like so awesome and they look so good(I mean have you seen Lucifer 🫦)

    Ngl your book description got me confused at the second paragraph tho but I still read your book
   Although in the second chapter the scene where she was talking Lila where we the readers suppose to guess that Lila saw her when she was outside the door ??
   Because it wasn't stated and if she was or is on a quest for revenge like your book description said who is it on/for ??

  At chapter 3 as I read it kinda felt like you switched and made Lila somehow the main character and not Celine.
    On some paragraphs your punctuations where all over the place
   Although I must say for someone who's first language isn't English I think you are doing really well so far.

  With the amount of chapters I read I would say your characters where a little bit all around the place they weren't how do I put this should I say they weren't playing there role.
    Because how do we have the mysterious Lucifer all of a sudden protecting what is his in just the 4th chapter that was a little bit rushed Don your think.
      And for Lila I feel like her character has so much potential you know to stay the villlan,what I'm trying to say is that you should refurnish your characters and make them better let us the readers know the difference between the main characters and side characterd the villains and the heroes I hope you are getting this tho.

Oh and I would give you all hand because for a new writer your chapters are at a great length.
    How much word do you think you have per chapter 🤔 →→→→

You book cover looks amazing btw
 

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To my readers:

I don't think I'm ever going to discourage you all from checking out a new book so can you all drop what ever you are doing and check this one out.

   Helo the author by voting and comment and also point out some errors(very helpful)
    Also follow me for more reviews,vote comment and I hope you like it here I'm going to try and post as much reviews as can from now on because from next year I'm gonna be so busy 😂😭but I'm still gonna be here.

Any way I'm so tired rn it's 11pm and my eyes are like literally closing as I'm typing I'm gonna go to bed now.

Ps:this is gonna be posted on Tuesday ❤️

Word count: Soo the word count is 600+ shocking right 😂
  I'm looking forward to a book that would make me write up to a thousand words

Ur book might be the one what are you waiting for submit that review

Oh and I forgot to tell you guys I tasted strawberries for the first time like 5 days ago and they where horrible 😭 the looked so fine but didn't taste good safe to say I won't be trying it again 🤚😂

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                                  ~Lonleyloner2007🍋‍🟩💚