Hey you all
For some reason I have been running out of things to yap about probably because most of you all aren't here or maybe I just don't know what to say😭.
   Oh yeah this would be the second to the last chapter for 2024 yes if you are seeing this it's probably Christmas eve the final chapter for 2024 would be dropped on Christmas yes (00:00) hope you all would be there when the last update of this year drops.

How have you all been doing I have been posting every day since last week 🤚🥹
    Oh you know the goal was to reach 7k before the year ends I'm not sure we can reach that but it's cool tho thank you for 6. Something k

   Now I think that would be enough info let's get to this review because why not hope you all enjoy it dont forget to vote infact do that now while I wait 👀👀
    Now enjoy

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Author: THE_ESTIMATED

Genre: Sci Fi

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

  Ok first of your book description it started off really good but then it just became all over the place I think it might need some revisiting.
    I'm your preface you wrote updates after a hundred votes do you mean per chapter because if that is the case I feel like you should maybe reduce that amount a little bit because your book is still new and audience might be low.
     And because you choose to wait for it to get to a hundred votes some readers loose interest 😃.

The little messages/ questions in the middle of chapters that might be a good idea and at the same time it isn't it's a good idea because you get to see who is engaging but you do know there are ghost readers.
    It's a bad idea because it's kinda distracting I would have preferred it at the end of the chapter of I where reading and I see the question pop at the end I would definitely answer but seeing it while reading I might skip because I wanna know what happens next 😃.

   While reading I noticed you used a lot of fullstops like ............ Was that necessary?
    Also your punctuations some where a little bit overused especially where they aren't even supposed to be but that can always be changed during final editing although since your chapters/book is still new you can clear those little errors 🤷.

    Chapter 3 felt more like a fantasy book didn't give off sci fi I don't think mich chapters give off sci Fi 😃🤷.
    At the beginning of chapter 3 the first paragraph was it an author's note if it is was I recommend using a different font for your author's notes.

Chapter length where quite good for now because this is still a new book so yeah.

  The one thing I like about your book was your spacing it was really put out well and that's awesome 😉.

To my readers:

    So the next chapter is officially the last chapter for 2024 Merry Christmas in advance you all.
   It's Christmas eve so yeah

Anyway here is another update for you all hope you guys enjoy this one.
   Check out the book it would be on my reading list check out my other reviewed books because why not.

Vote and comment on this chapter I miss reading you all's comments now the comments sections are empty.
Have a great day you all.

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Question for the day

Who is you all's favorite pop artist ??

What is your favorite Christmas song ??

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                              ~Lonleyloner2007🌌🌨️