peachspit

prologue

This is the first ever LGBT book I ever read and I honestly don't know if I like it or not.
The beginning is pretty nice and I have no other comments on it.

chapter 1

That's good to know.

chapter 2

I do agree with life being "hellven."
Also, I don't understand why God is being written like g-d.

Why would people avoid them just because their names are written on a bench and they are said to be the "lamest" people to live on planet Earth?

Her green eyes covered in think black paint? Why?

Why in the world was Ellen just standing there waiting for something to happen when she could've just run when Shannon looked at her?

Overall

Try checking your grammer again. I've only read three chapters and I feel like it's a good book and it seems pretty interesting.

-Sabah