cherry bomb|YOONGBERRY
Cherry Bomb
A nice beginning, but I think it'd look better if you added a title like SUMMARY or BLURB, etc.
Playlist
It's nice that you thought of adding a playlist.
Prelude
Try checking this chapter for grammar mistakes.
Chapter 1
Again recheck this chapter for grammatical errors.
I actually did not ever imagine Taehyung in that sort of way, but oh well. It seems unique and interesting.
Chapter 2
I actually don't like the idea of Cheri going out with a complete stranger. I haven't ever heard or seen people thirsty for company, especially girls, going like, "Hey no spots available? Count me in, I'm going out with someone I haven't met before just because he is bloody handsome."
It's weird that Taehyung himself doesn't know what he picked.
Overall
It seems like a pretty good story so far and I'm sure it will get better as the story proceeds. Just try checking for grammatical errors.
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