Review by- Cuddle_Puddle

For- jayden1454

I hope you are satisfied and happy with the review I gave. Please dont get offended or discouraged by the scores I gave as this review is only from my view. There are thousands of people here who might have better and different views. The review is as follows-

Cover- 9.5/10

The cover matches your story. As the story is about superdogs, the cover does depict some ferocious but good hearted dogs on their way to save the other innocent dogs.

Description- 9/10

The description is straight-forward and nice. It clearly tells what you are going to narrate the readers without any hints which reach no where. It is small but I guess a small description goes well with your story.

According to me, you should have chosen fantasy or random as the genre but its all up to you...

Story beginning- 7.7/10

It was normal I guess. Not that it was cliche or something, but the fact that is escalated just too quickly. The dogs getting the superpowers and everything else could do with a little more details. At the end of the day, its still your book and your choice what you want to do. I just gave an advice.

Punctuation mistakes/ Grammar mistakes/ Spelling errors- 5/10

There are really lot of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors throughout the book. Its okay if you have a weak english and you are trying. I will advice you to get your book edited as soon as possible. You can take the help of Book Editing Services we provide. There is a serious need for editing.

Story Structure- 6.5/10

The paragraphs need to be arranged litte properly. There must be a gap when you start telling something else. The sentence formation is okay but they need to be rearranged nicely to give some meaning. I would advice you to make the chapters a little detailed. Once its detailed, the readers can imagine it in the same way they watch superhero shows and movies. Describe every action they do. Other than that its nice.

Plot- 8/10

The plot is quite unique to say. Actually quite awesome for my brother as he also likes reading superhero books! So yeah, the idea is really nice and keep on writing such books.

Will I recommend this story-

Yeah. To all those who love superhero and superdog books, they should check this out.

Overall score- 8/10

Keep on writing and never lose hope in your book! Hope to see you back with a new request!