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my review for mending bonds book

shri-hari-arpanam 's book showed the bond between Krishna and Arjun in a very beautiful and touching way. It captures the essence of their friendship, which is based on love, trust, and devotion.

Krishna and Arjun are not only cousins, but also soul mates, who share a deep connection that transcends the worldly plane. They are Nara and Narayana, the human and the divine, who complement each other in every aspect.

Krishna is the guide, the mentor, and the charioteer of Arjun, who helps him overcome his doubts and fears. Arjun is the disciple, the warrior, and the friend of Krishna, who follows his instructions and fights for the righteous cause. They are both embodiments of the supreme spirit, who have taken different forms to fulfill their respective roles in the cosmic drama. Their bond is eternal and unbreakable, and it inspires millions of people to seek the same kind of friendship with the Lord.

I think the book is well-written and engaging, but I have some suggestions to make it better.

Here are some of them:

- Use grammarly to check the grammar and punctuations of your writings.

- You could add some more details about Krishna's appearance and expression, such as his clothes, his jewelry, his eyes, etc. This would help the reader to visualize him more vividly and feel his charisma and grace.

- You could also describe Arjun's emotions and thoughts more clearly, such as his awe, his gratitude, his humility, etc. This would help the reader to empathize with him and understand his devotion to Krishna.

- You could use some metaphors or similes to compare Krishna and Arjun to something else, such as the sun and the moon, the ocean and the river, the lion and the cub, etc. This would help to highlight their contrast and their relationship.

I really loved reading the book!

Fellow writers and readers to read the book and comment your review in this chapter 😁

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