bestbtsmylove143 's book has a good start for a fictional story that explores the theme of devotional love.

But here are some of my suggestions to improve it:

- You can use quotation marks to indicate the dialogue between the characters. For example, “Maa, why do you pray to him every morning?”

This will make it easier for the reader to follow the conversation and distinguish it from the narration.

- Do use punctuation marks to improve the readability and clarity of your story.

- You can add some details and descriptions to make your story more vivid and engaging. For example, you can describe the setting, the appearance and emotions of the characters, and the actions they take.
For example,
“She looked at the framed picture of Shree Ramchandra and Devi Sita on the wall, their faces glowing with divine grace and love. She felt a warm sensation in her heart, as if they were blessing her with their presence.”

I hope you find these suggestions helpful. I look forward to reading more of your story!

Fellow readers and writers who love Historical Fiction can read out the book! And write a review about it in the comment section 😊