Reviewer: Sadhana_2006

Book Review: 

Book Title: 18 Roses 
Author: Bunbunpuff

Review:

- The blurb is a bit empty, allowing readers to pass on the book. Try making it more creative for example, "Who keeps sending me roses? Friendships form, secrets are unveiled, and romance blossoms in unexpected places. In this cozy haven, every rose holds a clue, and curiosity leads to life-changing discoveries. Dive into "18 Roses" and uncover the stories waiting to be told."


- I noticed that your first chapter starts with a captivating scene, but as I continued reading, I encountered some minor grammar mistakes that interrupted my flow. Example "Friday, it was friday once again" could be rephrased by "Once more, it was Friday."

- " New my butt?" Sorry, but the line, had no grammer. Try, "People often declare it's party night, but to me, it feels more like a completely sober time."

 - "Another customer entered, went to another table" can be rephrased by showing the scene a bit more wider. Create the scene, using your emotions, try creating his walk, transforming it into words. "The customer entered, the doorbell ringing as he crossed the threshold and pulled a chair across the floor with a creak."

 - There are many areas that could use improvement, and this comes from a constructive place. I believe you have the potential to excel with a few adjustments. For instance, incorporating creative writing techniques, expanding on scenes to provide a clearer picture of the situation, and paying attention to grammar—these elements are crucial as they can enhance the flow of your narrative.

-If you're seeking assistance, consider joining our Discord servers, where you can engage with our book mentors, or join academies on Wattpad that provide foundational teaching and support.

-  I thoroughly enjoyed reviewing your chapter! The plot is fantastic. However, I couldn't continue reading beyond the first chapter due to some errors.

- You have tremendous potential as a writer—keep refining your skills!No hate! I didn't mean to rude. I justed wanted to help you out!

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With love,
Sadhana & The Writer's Hub Team