Originality: 10/10

Spelling and Grammar: 10/10

Character Development: 10/10

Overall Quality: 10/10

Opinion:

Let me first say that I did something really bad. I judged this book at first. I thought from the synopsis, "Oh, this is going to be another book like Pride and Prejudice or Emma," but I was very wrong. It took me by surprise how original it was. In fact, I loved it even more because of how you told the story.

I enjoyed how you emphasized each character's personality well. The way how they interacted with each other, and the way you described their actions. So far, because of that, I am really loving the personalities of Elena and Kieran.

The way how you also used description made me feel as if I was there in the story. My favorite part was when you were describing the way how Elena danced. It was amazing!

The grammar and spelling were also awesome. I enjoyed how you used a simple, yet broad, variety of vocabulary words. It made the reading flow with ease.

I enjoy it so far and can't wait to read more.

A/N: I also apologize for the long wait!! Thank you for being so patient. (;^;) I had something to do over this past weekend, which took up a lot of time. I was happy to read your story, though!!

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