Originality: 9/10

Spelling and Grammar: 10/10

Character Development: 9/10

Overall Quality (screw the last two scores): 10/10

Don't read any further if you want to check out the story yourself by writingjuniper

Opinion (SPOILER):

Let me start this off.

This story was AMAZING.

It reminded me so much of Maria Holic, Kimi ni Neiro, W Juliet, Nousatsu Junkie, etc. More on the Maria Holic side though (not as raunchy and a little more clean).

I loved loved loved it so much!

For one thing, I love the crossdressing boy type stories. I have a weak (romantic) heart for them. As you can tell from the number of mangas I've written up above, I've read a bit too many.

I would say the story idea isn't that original, but don't fret (is that how you spell it?). Although we have a girl who goes to an all girls school and meets Angel, a crossdressing boy, I enjoyed how you developed the story and made it your own. You were able to take that and make me squeal as I read it (not the whole thing, for I wanted to savor my squealing for after this review).

I would say that the character development for Angel and Camellia were great, but you may need to work on it a bit more for when you introduce characters; for example, you may need to use a bit more details to describe different actions of the characters, the scenes at which they are, etc. in a little more detail. However, don't worry! I too have a problem. It is something I need to work on too. (;v;)b

Your spelling and grammar was great. I loved the variety of words and sentence structures used.

Now for the overall rating, let us forget about the other two scores and give you a 10/10. Now this is biased from me because it is my guilty pleasure reading these types of stories. But one thing that I love the most are PLOT TWISTS! That was a plot twist I wasn't expecting, and I loved it!

Thank you for making my day with this story!!

Again, feel free to read this novel by writingjuniper. It is worth the read in my opinion. ;]