Originality: 10/10

Grammar & Spelling: 10/10

Character Development: 10/10

Overall Quality: 10/10

Opinion:

I loved reading it so much! It was such an awesome dystopian type book. I loved it.

I felt that the story was pretty original, despite having a lot of sci-fi, dystopian novels out there. The way how you presented the character's feelings and presented the storyline was amazing.

You did an excellent job on spelling and grammar. I enjoyed the simple, yet broad amount of vocabulary and sentence structures you used.

So, let's talk about the part I really liked about this story: the description. The description was just fantastic! I loced how each description you used correlated well with the story and showed the emotions of the character, which helped with the character development. I always emphasize the famous saying: "Actions speak louder than words." You put that saying to practice with your story.

Spoiler:

I also loved how you wrote this line here:

I loved it so much I just had to mention it.

I also loved the cover. It was very intriguing.

I would say that this is a good read.

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