Originality: 10/10

Spelling and Grammar: 10/10

Character Development: 10/10

Overall Quality: 10/10

Opinion:

It was good so far. Great character development, I didn't see any problems with the spelling or grammar, and each little story had its own originality.

I don't have any issues except the thing I stated in your last review, which is just my pet peeve. There's nothing wrong with it.

I really enjoyed the second-person writing and enjoyed how you carried that through.

This review will be quite short since it was good and don't have anything to rant about (maybe only that I can't write in second-person lol).

Anyway, great job and keep up the good stories! (I will be trying out your Tom and Jerry one very soon. I have the tissues ready too.)

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