Originality: 9/10

Grammar and Spelling: 10/10

Character Development: 10/10

Overall Quality: 10/10

Opinion:

I really, really enjoyed this!!

Although the coffee shop meeting a hot, handsome, dark guy isn't an original trope, I enjoyed how you made a clean (Is this a good word) transition. You made the trope very nice and more enjoyable with the characters.

I liked Alex so far. I thought you did well with his character development. Sometimes the best way to describe a character isn't through their words, but rather through their actions.

Although we didn't really get a full-on character development for the tall, handsome man, we did see a glimpse of his personality. The way you describe him with his words and actions made him more and more mysterious. I want to see more of him!! (I fangirl over those types lol)

I felt you did an excellent job at introducing and describing the characters in just one chapter.

The spelling and grammar were amazing. Sometimes, as an English 101 student who gets some pet peeves because of an ego problem, I harp on grammatical errors and spelling errors (tho I can't spell myself). However, I enjoyed the grammar structures you used and the easy yet perfect vocabulary words you used. It made me enjoy the story more.

Can't wait for more!!

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