Originality: 10/10

Spelling and Grammar: 9.9/10

Character Development: 10/10

Overall Quality: 10/10

Opinion:

Wow. Just wow. I don't say this often, but I really, really enjoyed your writing style. It was just purely fantastic in my opinion.

The character development was also good. I liked how you described both of the character's actions and then their first interaction with each other.

I just saw one mistake when it came to the grammar.

Just capitalize the "a" and all should be good.

Thank you so much for your patience, and can't wait to read more!

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