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Book 17|| "Love is All (Requested Oneshots)"

Originality: 9/10

Spelling and Grammar: 10/10

Character Development: 10/10

Overall Quality: 10/10

Opinion:

This was such a great idea in my opinion. I enjoyed how you made short stories out of people's requests for ships. It was interesting.

Some of the ships I did know who they were, and some I was like, "Huh?" (The Tom x Jerry one. I couldn't bring myself to read it. I apologize.) But either than that, they were great, and I enjoyed how you wrote them.

[A/N: Apparently the Tom and Jerry one isn't a romance. I was just being stupid and read it as Tom X Jerry rather than Tom & Jerry. Ty author for clearing that up for me. 👍]

For the spelling and grammar, I didn't see anything wrong so far. So Yay!!

However, I do want to make one recommendation.


The red-lined area is where I would recommend starting a new paragraph. Just from my experience (don't know if anyone else experiences this), I find it kind of hard to read when the quotes of everyone talking are in the same paragraph. I feel that it is easier to read if they were separate, for example, Dexter talks in one paragraph, then Hibiki in the next, etc.

This is just a recommendation, so don't feel the need to fix it if you feel it is fine!

Anyway, so far it was really good. 👍

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