Originality: 10/10

Spelling and Grammar: 9.9/10

Character Development: 10/10

Overall Quality: 10/10

Opinion:

I really like it so far. It feels very medieval, fantasy-like, which caught my interest.

I feel that it is very original. You did a great job developing your characters so far, which I fell in love with both Audrey's and Will's personalities. The way they interacted with each other was nice.

For the spelling and grammar, you did pretty well. I did find one mistake, but I feel that it can be fixed easily.

This part:

I noticed a run-on sentence which can be easily fixed with a comma:

He couldn't read, and Audrey knew that he wasn't proud of it.

Either than that, everything was perfect! Can't wait to read more!

(I apologize for taking a long time and then giving you such a short review. But I did really enjoy the story so far! And ty for your patience!)

Read the story by -sunsett