Originality: 10/10

Grammar and spelling: 10/10

Character Development: 10/10

Overall Quality: 10/10

Opinion:

I enjoyed reading this book. I enjoyed how the details of the school were explained and the actions of each character were well brought out.

I enjoyed how you set out your details. You clearly explained a lot in the first chapter, which I was only able to read up to because I'm such a slow reader (lol). The details you used explained the personality of each character very well, and I thought it was a great way to help emphasize character development. The way you explained their reaction to certain scenarios made me love each character more and more.

Although some people base originality on how much a trope is used, I like to base it on how well you use that trope or make that trope "your own". I enjoyed how you explained everyone's reaction on the first day of school.

I liked how you used a broad amount of vocabulary and grammar structures in your story. It made it more enjoyable.

Although the chapters were super long for what I usually read, I enjoyed it.

It was sad that I was only able to read one chapter because I wanted to send out this review to you fast so you wouldn't worry, but I really enjoyed that first chapter. When I have more free time, probably after finals, I will be sure to read more of your story. I want to see what happens to John (One of my fav characters so far).

Continue writing and using details! That made me enjoy the story.

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