I had my sister edit the next chapter of The Trials and every few words she would frown and glance at me before pretending to change something.

I of course didn't notice she was only pretending and I though my writing was horrible... I felt really bad at the end of it and started ranting to my sister saying I would get better and all that and she was so confused.

She then told me my writing was actually pretty good and I died a little on the inside. I had spent almost an hour sitting there thinking she was rewriting the entire chapter when really she was just pretending it was bad.

I don think I've ever felt so bad in my life... I'm never letting her edit my work ever again. Even though I have no one else to edit my work and she's amazing at writing I will never let her edit my work again... (Cough lies cough)