Genre: Short Story

Summary: A short collection of modern day fairy tales.

In our fast paced world, magic, imagination and far away stories seem to be long forgotten in our modern technology fuelled lifestyles. Join the characters in these modern day fairy tales, who may remind you of a certain fairy godmother or a notorious bad wolf, and remember no matter how rushed and stressed your life maybe, keep your eyes open for a little bit of magic, as not all is as it always seems.

+ Cover

Not bad but very dull. It should be a bit more eye-catching. Maybe you can look of cover makers.

Rating: 5.5/10

+ Title

A bit too long. It gives an idea that the story has something to do with fairy tales but it doesn't sound pleasing to the ears.

Rating: 6.5/10

+ Summary

Short and to the point.

Rating: 8/10

+ Plot

Retelling of Fairy Tales aren't unique but everyone has their own way of re-writing the stories.

Rating: 8/10

+ Chapters

So to begin with, I read only your first story so I will be commenting based on that.

The main drawback I found is the lack of spaces between the lines. Each dialouges should be separated into different paragraphs for an easy read. Yours were all clumped up together and therefore caused me to lose interest.

That being said, the plot and the way you have written it is beautiful. I like the story and I think that it deserves more reads and votes.

But as I mentioned before, the pattern in which you write is very confusing and clumped up together therefore driving away the readers.

Other than that, there is a whole lot of confusion. I had to read it twice to understand the talk between the Duke and Reaf.

The pace seemed rushed at a few parts while on the other it flowed fine.

I like Reaf and Ana. I think my favourite part was the one after her story telling where they have a rather sweet conversation. Of course, it ended detoriating but then it was nice while it lasted.

For some reason, the butler reminded me of Sebastian (Anime character). I love, love, love him xD He is a very interesting character I feel.

I really enjoyed reading it and despite my slight irritation at the clumped up paragraphs, I couldn't stop reading until I finished the story.

+ Conclusion

The stories are captivating and I enjoyed reading them. Edit it and it would truly be an amazing read.

+ Overall Rating

7/10