Genre: Fantasy

Summary:

They existed, working in the shadows, fighting a war mundane humans knew nothing of. This battle is of control and freedom. Of right and wrong.

Of light and darkness.

Because with the great Light Dragon's sacrifice came a battle to crush the light like no other.

+ Cover

You need to change it. Sorry to say but it is quite unappealing. I would not have read the book because the cover looks so unprofessionally done.

Rating: 4/10

+ Title

Not a bad title but a bit too simple. Maybe you could consider changing it into something better?

Rating: 6/10

+ Summary

Again, it needs work. I am sure you can do loads better (Maybe ask for a second opinion?) So just work on it and you will be absolutely fine.

Rating: 5/10

+ Plot

The plot isn't one I have seen before and I adore dragons so I am quite interested in reading it. But I have to ask, the idea about the dragons soul resting within a human body, did you derive inspiration of it from the anime Fairy Tail? Since the exact same thing happens there.

Of course, that is the only thing that reminded me of Fairy Tail.

Rating: 8/10

+ Characters

Isabel: She seems to be the "Act without Thinking" kind of person. She went off into the woods despite knowing that it was dangerous. She acted on an impulse. There isnt much to say about her character since you only introduced her in the prologue.

Josh: I like the 'high pain tolerance' thing. He seems to be kind of selfless and thinks logically which is always a plus.

Rating: 8/10

+ Chapters

Length: A bit too much on the long side actually. Kind of put off about it but not a great problem.

Grammar, Sentence Structure: Nearly perfect. No errors that I could spot at least.

General:

Despite your mediocre cover and summary, the story is amazingly written. The descriptions are vivid and characters are marvellous.

The fact that you added dragons into the mix just make this story even better. I was wondering about the Fairy Tail thing though. :P

But all in all, the story has a lot of potential and I am curious to see where this would do. Of course, I will be looking forward to learning how the bond works if the blue eyed girl is the one from the prologue.

There isn't much I can say about the story at this point since it is just barely starting and has a long way to go.

+ Conclusion

This story is perfect for someone who likes dragons and 'normal-boy-being-thrust-into-an-adventure' kind of stories. Thr way it is written just makes it even more enjoyable.

+Overall Rating

8/10