Full Body Massage
Genre: Chick-Lit
Summary: Sexy short stories by a male masseur on his erotic encounters with daddy's girls, dangerous women, celebrities and more.
+ Cover
It's not all clear. I would recommend you change it.
Rating: 6/10
+ Title
It is simple and gives readers an idea of what the story is about.
Rating: 7.5/10
+ Summary
Short and to the point. Nothing much to be said about it. It does it's job.
Rating: 8/10
+ General
Since this is a true story, I will only be doing a general review.
Your writing style is smooth and neat with nearly no visible grammatical errors. Your sentence structuring is good and makes the story easy to read.
I would normally put this under erotic but then there is not much of anything happening so it will only be labeled as mature. I like the way you don't drone on and on about what happens. You actually cut off the chapter at the appropriate moment that leaves the readers curious for more.
I especially enjoyed the beginning since your cleared up any doubts (any accusations) that the readers would have in a very beautiful way.
The chapter that had me gritting my teeth was the one with the girl and her story about when she was 12 years old. I am glad that you felt the frustration and anger to because it is really sad and disgusting.
Beautiful portrayal.
Sufficient to say that I have never read any book quite like this. At the same time it isn't some vulgar thing that made me roll my eyes but something that made me think about the different kind of occupations out there.
This was something I actually had fun reading though it is something I wouldn't normally even glance at.
+ Conclusion
Definitely worth it. Not exactly Erotica (there is no sex though there is physical intimacy) but enough of action to make it interesting.
+ Overall Rating
8.5/10
Bạn đang đọc truyện trên: Truyen247.Pro