Genre: Romance

Summary: Do you know the feeling where your entire world falls apart? And you have to start over? That's all she's ever been through. So when Alexia has to start again, she's determined to stay away. No attachments, no disappointment. But what happens when she meets a boy, enigmatic and emotionless? A long journey of feelings as two hearts burn and crash.

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"Didn't you ever want to give up?"

"No, because then I wouldn't have met someone like you."

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Where a boy and a girl find solace in each other, following their own course of destiny.

+ Cover

It is really beautiful and very attractive.

Rating: 9/10

+ Title

Hmm.... Not a bad title but it can be a bit more subtle. Less cliché. I am guessing you like 'Fault in Our Stars' right? The title is unique and eye catching.

While your title isn't bad, there may be better ones out there.

Rating: 7/10

+ Summary

Well, it gives enough insight into the story and what to expect.

Rating: 7/10

+ Plot

These kind of stories are all about 're-discovered love' and things like those so it has a pretty mainstream plot.

Not unique but you can take it anyway you want to.

Rating: 7/10

+ Characters

Alex: Typical heroine for this kind of stories. Nothing that stands out about her though that isn't necessarily a bad thing.

Leah: She sound like a sweetheart to be honest. I like her (better than Alex actually)

I don't know much of the rest but since this is that kind of story I am sure that as the chapters go on we will be provided with valuable insight within their characters.

Rating: 7/10

+ Chapters

Length: There are a bit too long actually hence I didn't read the whole story.

Grammar, etc: The sentence structure irked me throughout the story. While I couldn't pinpoint what exactly was wrong, the sentences sounded awkward. They were robotic and rushed.

General:

Thing is, the plot you are applying is very much overused. There are more than a dozen of stories out there with same plot. So what can you do to make your story attractive and better than them?

Because you are basically competing with the other stories, everything needs to be near perfect.

The thing I liked the most are the character interactions. You spent enough time with all the characters and delved a little into how they are. But they feel rushed.

Like when you write a filler chapter, you just want to rush through it.

The part about her father. One minute they are at each other's throat and the other they are loving? I would hope for a smoother transition.

Other than that, I think the story is interesting and while I didnt read the whole thing I am sure that it will be amazing.

+ Conclusion

Might seem a bit mainstream but it is written by a John Green fan so you can bet there will be a lot of bittersweet moments as well as moments you would go 'Awwww'.

+ Overall Rating

7/10