Reviewer: SagarikaKhanna

Author: aiajaberthebooknerd
Title: The Refugees of the World
Genre: Historical Fiction
Summary:
When the world is in the height of its madness, finding sane people is scarce. Meet Reyna. She, finds six teens scattered across the globe. And, let's just say that they don't exactly get along. Six teens who are as broken as possible and moulds them into something completely new. The strongest team possible. And there, you may think physical strength. No, mental strength. When the most petrifying event in history to date strikes, the whole world falls out of place and into havoc all the more, the team must set aside their differences and find out what they should really do. And, they're not really sure which side is good and evil anymore.

My take on your story:
When I read the summary, I could deduce that it will be an interesting read. And guess what? I was right.
You, my fellow author, trap the reader in the web of your words. Your words entranced me. I was up the whole night reading your masterpiece under the protection of my blanket.
It kept me on the edge.
But every luscious red rose has a few thorns. From what I could make out, there were a few grammatical errors. Your tenses need refurbishing. You could hire an editor to go through your book. Next, my main worry would be regarding ' the description'. You need to show in more depth what the characters are feeling. Their thoughts and emotions enable the reader know the characters better. The prologue is the window to your story. My suggestion is that you inject a little more energy into it by actively describing what is going on and not just summarizing the event in one line. In my opinion, your story is well written. A little tweaking along these lines could do wonders for your story. I hope my review was helpful.

Rating : 8.5/10

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