Author: TheGirlWithRayBans

Reviewer: arhitha

Well, the prologue was pretty different, from the books I have read so far.
With only two chapters written and read, I can tell your story is going well with the plot.
The blurb was to the point and is catching people's attention! So that's a score.
There are not much actually none grammatical errors , so it won't irritate the readers.
Even the bickering between the main lead about the difference of cultures is realistic
Coming to the points to be improved:
I guess you should go for a better cover, this ones not at all grabbing the attention, in other words it's raw, try for a professional cover, as here in wattpad books are judged by the cover!
That's all I can tell for now!
On the whole it depends on the readers choice if they want to go for such book or not!
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