Title - The guy in the leather jacket
Genre - Humor
Reviewer: @SagarikaKhannaBooks
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I am not really captivated by the cover. Let me be specific. The picture is nice. I am entranced, enraptured and spell-bound by the hot boy on the cover.
But the text of your title does not match the title. Try using Francois one or Bebas Neue.
You can seek the help of our resident designers, HayleyMonroe or Suganthii.
They are both prodigies.
The blurb was good. It was well written. But it was not in sync with the cover. I was hoping for a tidbit on the guy. So a sychronization between the two is of utmost important. But you did a pretty good job of introducing us to the five main characters.
Your writing is simple and sweet. I want to laugh till my sides ache during some scenes. Your portrayal of each girl is utterly perfect. The way you have described their excitement at the thought of being a Senior excited me too! It took me back to my last days at school. I noted a variety of grammatical errors though.
The sentence construction was a bit wonky at some places. Punctuation and dialogue formation are your weak areas.
Character development was good. What the book needs is some editing! If you work on the areas pointed out, it will be perfect!
The plot was engaging and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
So dear readers,
If you are looking for a good read that will tickle your sides, then this is a must read!
Rating: 8/10