Reviewer: SagarikaKhanna

Author: gigitel

Title: The faults in Nandini

Genre: Chicklit

Review:
Cover: I love your cover. It is intricately designed. Hats off to you or your designer for such ingenuity. The text style and colours perfectly match with the setting of your story. The picture really captures the reader's attention and coerces them to read the book. The cover is perfect on all counts.

Summary: Summary is the crux of your story. It is well written. But there are some grammatical errors that need to be corrected. The summary could be probably written in a better way. For example:' "I want to change myself!" wailed Nandini after studying herself in the mirror.
A social pariah, she decides to go to New York to reinvent herself...'
It could be structured like this.

Story Content: This is a stereotypical nerdy girl likes the school stud story. I like such stories. Every Wattpader likes such stories. There are millions of stories with the same setting. In my opinion, something must be done to make your story stand out amongst the others. Some twists and turns will surely help. On the other hand, it is well written but has a few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. These areas are areas of primary concern. Bad grammar always puts a reader off. You can seek the help of Wattpad Editors on @NewStoriesLibrary. They offer exemplary editing services. Overall, I found this story to be a stress buster! It was a fun read.
Rating: 7.85/10
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