Title: SHE MET HER GENTLEMAN

Author: Popsy_Grl

Genre: Short Story/Romance

Summary: Ashbalia Khan is a 23 year old naqabi and the beloved daughter of Swaleha Khan who is an Arab and Mohd. Razaan Khan, a successful Indian business tycoon living in British Columbia, Canada. Being an anti social person her only friend is Mehreen Naaz who is a complete social butterfly. Ashbalia loves reading romances and hence dreams of finding the perfect gentleman but stormy thinks that in the present time a true gentleman doesn't exist. She has a notion that boys of the present time are mannerless, arrogant, have a huge ego, don't respect girls, and can't give their commitment to a single girl. In short they lack all the gentlemanly qualities.

After having such bad views about boys how Ashbalia will find her gentleman? Read to know :)

Reviewer: Rosemerrypuff1609

Review:

I liked book. It's a cute story, which I am sure everyone will like.

Yes, the story is Muslim based one, but the author has made sure it's NOT racist. She has emphasized on Muslim culture and at the same time made it pleasant for everyone to read it, and I would like to appreciate her for that. Also she has made sure to explain what the unknown words mean, helping the reader understand the Islamic practices. Please do read the NOTE given by the author at the start of the book; it would help you to understand her feelings. And for a first timer she has done a good job.

Now coming to the plot, like I said, it's a cute storyline, and if you're into romance books, you will really like.

Grammatically, there's nothing much to point out, but the author could edit the story a little, and when I mean the story, not the plot but how the dialogues have been presented. It would help the reader to understand the emotions of the character better. The chapter's lengths are good for a short story. Also the author can try to change the ending of the story, it's quite abrupt, and so a little epilogue would be nice. Now this is just a suggestion.

The summary given is good, nothing much to change. The cover of the book is good, but it could be better, considering the plot is good. Something a little more colorful and eye catchy.

So overall I would like to say this book, with its sweet story and happy ending, is a perfect one for passing your time and put a smile to your face, as both a reviewer and a reader.

Rating: 7/10

P.S. These are just suggestions made by me for the betterment of the book; it's up to the author to implement them. And I didn't mean to hurt the author's feelings, and would like to apologize, if I have.

- Rosemerrypuff1609, Reviewer, RamblingBrooks.