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Pinky Swear

Title : Pinky Swear

Author : Rosemerrypuff1609

Summary : One long forgotten pinky swear.Two polar opposite people. Throw in a bunch of crazy-weirdo friends and bestie mom's and dads along with crazy siblings..... Well lets just say, It's one heck of a emotional roller-coaster filled with drama, humour, friendship, love, jealousy, blackmail, hatred and most importantly more........PINKY SWEARS.

Genre : Romance

Review by : scarlet_sugar

Review :

Well, I liked the book. It was good.

This book has a typical "nerdy & the body boy types" theme & if you love these types of books, you'll surely love this one! Being this the author's first book, this is really lovely!♥

I loved the planning of the book. Everything is planned & well-expressed. Also, I love the characters!♥ They are quite reletable.

But the book can be better. The cover is lovely, no doubt, but if you ask me, go on a brighter one. The current one is really cute, but even if you try changing the background colour ( which is blue ) with a fresh one, it would look appealing. Or, you can go for a girly & a lively cover, too.

Also, you can try to enhance your characters a bit. Their nature's are reletable, but, are unable to connect with the readers.

Now, these were my opinions from a point of view of a Reviewer, but, if I could've read this as a reader, I would've found this 'nearly' awesome except the cover & presentation of the characters aside.

Also, a major problem can be the Chapter's length. Chapters could be a little longer & descriptive. Also, make sure that you dont rush with the scenes.

Just take care of the cover & few grammatical errors & it'll be great.

Best wishes with the author, forever & ever! :)

Rating : 6/10

                        ~ Review by scarlet_sugar :)

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P.S : I hope the author doesn't take my suggestions in a offensive way. Infact, I hope the author works on the things I suggested :)

P.P.S : If you liked scarlet_sugar's review, dont forget to check her Review Book! ^_^
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