Author: BabyRose2

Reviewer:SagarikaKhanna

Title: One night, Alone

Review:
Cover: When a reader is choosing a book to read, he will always study the cover. If the cover is not up to the mark or mediocre, he will not read your work. It is not the summary and the story content that decide the fate of your book but it is the cover. In my opinion, the cover is not very professionally done. It is not in sync with the plot or the summary. You can try Rambling Brooks' Covers Designer or the MDC for better results. We have talented designers that can help you achieve good results.

Summary: It is short and concise. But it is incomplete. I don't know what sort of book I'm plunging into. As a reader, I have never liked surprises. I prefer to read books with summaries that are complete. A perfect summary has five important elements like good vocabulary, correct sentence formation, punctuation (in the case of dialogues), character introduction and subtle hints about the plot. I felt that your summary was lacking on all the five counts. You can try NewStoriesLibrary. They offer exemplary editing services.

Story Content:
I have always been a voracious reader. As I have been reading books since age seven, I can say with pride that I have the ability to distinguish between a book that is well written and a book that is badly written. As a reviewer, it is my job to pick out the swan (a good book) from a flock of ordinary birds(bad books). Your story falls somewhere between the two categories. It is well written to warrant good criticism on some counts and bad on others. Your strong point is a good writing style which is simple yet acceptable. I feel that a prologue is necessary. Your story abounds in grammatical errors. It needs refurbishing and editing. Your dialogue writing needs a lot of work. As soon as you complete a story, re-edit it or get a beta reader to do it for you. Overall, I was not bedazzled by the story. But it was a good read.

Rating: 6/10
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