Never Say Never - arhitha -

Review by: Tulsi107

- Wonderful plotline you have there, I definitely enjoy the way you've shaped the story so that you leave readers wondering. You leave a few chapters as cliffhangers which adds an excellent touch.

- I also really liked the images you added to accompany the writing as a visual aid. Some of them, I really enjoyed examining them because they were so beautiful! I think that's an excellent idea.

- I definitely also like the names such as Arjun. I think that they suit the personality of your character and definitely stand out as a hero/heroine (whomever it may be)

Now onto some suggestions!

- I suggest a newer cover that will help give everyone an understanding as to what your book is about. I feel like looking at your cover doesn't tell me much, plus, it's not very eyecatching.

- Your punctuation, I feel, is a little too much sometimes. For example, I see '!!!' which I believe is quite over the top because one exclamation mark would suffice instead of having dozens. Also, remember that with your '...' The correct use of ellipses is just THREE dots, and not dozens.

- Remember to separate your writing into paragraphs so that its easier to read and we don't get lost in a sea of just words with no breathing space.

Otherwise, great book!

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3/5

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