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Reviewer: @Abnegationbooklover

About:

Melody summer, a nineteen year old homeless girl with a painful past. Shy and introvert with major insecurities, accidentally irreligious. she aged out of foster care and was left without guidance to fend for herself in the concrete jungle of Manhattan. When she meets Akram Sadiq. Twenty one, Handsome, muslim, Egyptian-American, Juilliard student, her life takes an unexpected turn

Review:

Well, I am amazed by the though and effort of the summary and the first chapter. Very well done and very well edited. I couldn't find any mistakes. The character has a different feels then the character then you will find in a regular love story. The suspense is great add to each chapter. The character has a sense of justice in her and it intrigues the audience how this sweet and gentle girl will get through the rough life of the outside world. Try putting more action in your story as it will help keep the audience engaged throughout the book. The only problem that has been bothering me about your book is that a good book like this should have a cover that lives up to the potential of the book. The cover doesn't fit the book in my opinion. Therefore, my advice will be to get a better cover or you can always look around Wattpad to find some talented cover makers.

Rating: 9/10

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