Like Hurricanes
Author: live-artistically
Title: Liks Hurricanes
Reviewer: SagarikaKhannaBooks
Genre: Teen Fiction
Review:
The cover is beautiful! It perfectly blends with this coming of age story. It inspires the reader to actually start reading the book. Kudos to you and your designer on such stellar work!
The summary/blurb is well-written. It perfectly highlights the plot of your tale. I have a suggestion. A shorter and a concise blurb is always more preferable. Try to mince the plot into a few words and give character introductions within the story itself.
The content of the story is very good. Your vocablulary is good too. But the chapters lack an emotional depth.
The chapters sound like narratives. But you could improve on it as we are all still learning. The plot is a breath of fresh air. It is miles away from generic Wattpad stories. This scored you brownie points with me. Another tiny thing that I would like to point out is the lack of physical descriptions. I can't envision what your characters look like. Overall, it was a lovely read!
Dear Readers,
If you are looking for a coming-of-age story, I would certainly recommend this book as it has the potential to be hailed as one of Wattpad's legends one day!
Rating: 9/10
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