Author: scarlet_sugar

Reviewer: SagarikaKhanna

Title: Letters

Genre: Random

Review:
Cover: The cover of your story is beautiful. The picture of the candle on the cover gives it a vintage feel. The use of parchment yellow as your background colour certainly augments your story. The darkish brown-maroon colour of your text complements the cover well. The cover succeeds in grabbing the reader's attention. Kudos to the ingenuity of you or your designer!

Summary: I think your summary needs to be refurbished. It needs to be preppy and energetic. For example, 'Are you bad at expressing your thoughts on paper?
Do you freeze when you pick up the pen?
Then do not worry. You have come to the right place! I, Isha solemnly swear that I'll do my best to capture your feelings on the paper....'
The summary needs an injection of your personality- bubbly and happy.

Story Content: I have to say this. Isha you are a very happy and a bubbly fourteen year old! Your personality is reflected in your writing style. Don't ever lose your charm. Your letters seem to never fail in putting a smile on the face of this stressed out and jaded nineteen year old (me)! There are some grammatical errors. But I guess that will go away as you grow up. The topics on which you write your letters are unique. I can assure you that this book is going to be a huge hit one day! I am hoping that this book will be featured one day!

Rating: 8.5/10
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