Author: devingel95
Reviewer: arhitha
Firstly your writing style is really good, it suits your genre, there was no repetition of certain words while you write the dialogues, that shows you have a good command over vocabulary.
Your idea of writing quotes related to that chapter, was amazing and the selection of those quotes was apt according to the chapter.
Even the cliffhangers did the magic! They make the readers go more and more into the story.
The relationship between the group of friends was also described beautifully, even the chat was so natural.
Coming to the points to improve:
You can rewrite the blurb, It didn't do much justice to your actual writing, instead of the present one, you can try writing it in the form of dialogues, I feel it catches more attention.
Even your cover wasn't eye-catching, try for a newer cover!
Overall your book is quite entertaining, once they start reading your work, they'll surely continue, so once you mend your cover and blurb, it will be all set to go.
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