Author: Janicexiaosyuen

Title - I am morix
R E V I E W E R: SagarikaKhannaBooks

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R E V I E W:
Cover: The cover is gorgeous! I love bright colours on a cover.
It compliments your story so well! Though, I have a little something to point out here. The size for font of the author's name should be smaller. More of an emphasis should be made on the title of the story.
You do that and you are golden! I loved the cover! Kudos to your or your designer for the creativity!

Summary: This is well-worded and well-written.
It gave me the urge to open and read the book. It had an aura of mystery that hooked me in! I was eager to find out what or who a Morix is!
And your protagonist hates a Morix. I was eager to know the reason behind her fear.
CONTENT:
Your style of writing is simple and easily comprehe nsible. You have the makings of a good author Janice. The plot is excellent and engaging. Character development is good! There are some grammatical errors. You need to work on your prepositions and tenses.
So a good editing session is needed. I am going to continue reading this book. I hope you update soon!