Expectional Devotes - anilk23 -

Review by Tulsi107

A B O U T :

Hello everyone, just curious to put my ideas and spectacular wordings in every corner generally, so its my first published book contain random sectors of life which you all can relate to. This is not the complete part as I will keep updating every time. So I want you all users to go through it and let me know what you feel ? Comments and voting could be my next step inspirational source.

R E V I  E W :

First off, this is a type of a book that I've never read before. I never read something that had a message with such depth in each and every work. It's truly a gem to keep in your library if you want to read something from time to time to give you a reminder, a message, some light. So great job on that!

Something I feel that you should fix would be using 'because' instead of 'coz' since that is slang. It makes your book die down in its serious tone you want to give off. That's one definite thing that kind of took me out of the vibe of the book. Another thing I'd suggest is to do is to split your paragraphs up into smaller chunks. Especially in MY DESTINATION. I feel like every time you start talking about a new idea, I get lost into the sea of words.

Make sure that when you start a new idea, it's a new paragraph. That way it still keeps your readers engaged rather than feeling that the book is too long. Just a pointer :D

Exceptionally written book, I can find lots of poetic devices within your writing which gives it a really nice touch.

Keep up the excellent work and don't forget to use a cover that stands out! I can't read the text on the book and it doesn't tell me it's anything about what you're writing. I suggest a minimalist cover with an object in the center with the title at the top, and your (author's name) at the bottom.

Hope this helped!

STARS:
3/5

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