Reviewer: SagarikaKhanna

Author: SophiesBookOfFandoms

Title: Destined

Genre: Fantasy

Review:
Cover: I really liked the cover. It matches the settings of your story. The byline captures the spirit of your story. It is very catchy. Colours are not clashing and they perfectly capture the mood of your story.
Summary: It is mysterious and eye-catching. It is well written without giving away too much. It also gives the readers an insight into Tori's life.
Story content:
This story reminds me of the days when I used to read the book, Eragon. I happen to love Dragons! It again invoked my love for such stories. You rarely find such stories on Wattpad. The story starts with Tori thinking about her grandma. I feel that detail is missing. I would love to know what that dragon necklace looks like. I can't imagine Tori in my head as I don't know what she looks like. I don't know anything about Leo or Miss Thorne either. There is very little imagery. I feel these characters would look better in the next chapter. I feel the introduction of these characters is like an intrusion. On a level, I began to connect with Tori but Leo's entry breaks that thread of connection. A little focus on detail will help your story. Overall, it is a well-written piece and I would highly recommend it to all fantasy lovers!
Rating: 8.5/10
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