A U T H O R: neharica

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R E V I E W:
Cover:
The cover is so beautifully done. It perfectly syncs with the plot and the summary. The font could be be better though. Use Bebas Neue or Francois One. The font size of the name of the author should be smaller and in the same font style as the title of the story.
Overall, the cover is appealing to the eye and it urged me to continue reading the book.

Summary:
Summary is another important facet of a story. It urges the reader to read the book. It has to be thought provoking and engaging. It is the introduction to your book. Your summary seems okay. You could work on it. My suggestions are to keep it short and crisp. You could use a better vocabulary. It could be worded differently. For eg-- She had fallen in love with him. She could not leave him to go marry another man. He held her heart in his hands. She may marry another man but she her heart would always be his.
Try framing it this way.

Content:
I love Indian stories. Your writing style has a Bollywood feel to it which is appreciated. It's movie - like setting makes it an interesting read. I like your protagonist, Anya. She is like every young woman. The realistic way in which you have portrayed her is commendable. Your writing style is nice. But there are grammatical errors. A good editing session is needed. Till now, the plot is engaging and keeps on the edge of my seat.
So my dear readers,
If you are looking for a Bollywood extravaganza with well developed characters and a beautiful love story, this is the book for you.

R A T I N G: 8/10