P.S : If you want your book to be reviewed, you're most welcomed. But, if you want me to review your book [as there are many reviewers here] I'll generally prefer reviewing Romance/Teen Fiction books .

If your book is  under different genre, I can't promise to review it unless & until the summary appeals me :)

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Title : Daddy

Author : CoarilineRose

Summary : Imagine this : "You're a bratty 6 year old, wearing a princess dress, waiting for your Daddy to come to play tea party, than BAM, he's not your Daddy anymore, instead, you have to share it with some other snobby freak. And the worst part is, he doesn't show up for tea time! What would any normal 6 year old do? Get the girl out of the way of course!"

Genre : Short Story / Teen Fiction

Review by : scarlet_sugar

Review : I loved this one! The first chapter was itself, so catchy & captivating that I just couldn't stop reading this♥

The first few chapters ( when the main lead is a child ) are presented so beautifully♥ I believe, when you write something, you have to become one with the character. It is usually a little challenging when you're writing in a kid's point of view. Not everytime you see yourself relating with the character.

But here, the author has become a kid herself & have written the first few parts amazingly, I would say. You start pitying the girl for her grief, pain & sorrows.

The next chapters ( after the main lead grows up ) are portrayed well too. In short, the graph is maintained. The drastic change over is a little unexpected but great.

But, I feel, the chapters are short. A little lengthy chapters would do. Also, there are a few grammatical errors in the deacription itself. The description is really catchy, but I feel it should be extended a bit.

Also, the cover is the major problem here. Please, try to get a new cover as soon as possible as it eats down the excitement you have after reading the summary.

Also, I feel, the name of the book can be changed. While reading the childhood sequences, it feels pretty proper. But, once the character grows up, there is no connection as such with the name. So, I suggest you to change the name too.

And, also, I'm not sure if I can call this book under the Short Story Genre. The book already has chapters more than 15. So, I'm not sure if this is compatible under Short Story genre.

Other than that,  a great piece of work. Beautiful presentation & the writing is the strength of the book.

My best wishes with the author, forever! :)

Rating : 8/10

                        ~ Review by scarlet_sugar :)

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P.S : I hope the author doesn't take my suggestions in a offensive way. Infact, I hope the author works on the things I suggested :)

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