Author:chowanisha

Reviewer: SagarikaKhanna

Title: Confidante

Genre: Teen Fiction

Review:
Cover: The cover is not in sync with your story. I advice you against using clip-arts for cover pictures. The dark mood of the cover set by you or your designer is daunting. The colour scheme deters the readers from reading your book. I think that you should invest in a cover made by a professional designer. Rambling Brooks can help you there. We have got a team of designers that can help you achieve good results.
Summary: I was a little confused after I read your summary. It was not very clear in what it was trying to say. Clarity of thought is essential. The summary should be framed in a way that it appeals to the readers.
I found many grammatical errors in your summary. Nobody can have perfect grammar. But you can certainly take the help of many summary writers. There are many clubs, threads and pages devoted to this cause. One such example is the @NewStoriesLibrary. This page offers exemplary services.
Story Content: The soul of your story is the story content. If the content does not appeal to the readers, they will not read it. After reading your story, I found many errors. The prologue is a copy of the summary. I advice you against using this writing tactic. The prologue should be more detailed. A prologue is an introduction to your story. It is the foundation. If the foundation is weak, then the building ie your story can collapse. In the next few chapters, my main areas of concern are the lack of detail and faulty grammar. Bad grammar especially punctuation always puts readers off. So try proof-reading the chapter or get an editor (@NewStoriesLibrary) to proof-read it for you. I hope my suggestions were helpful.
Rating: 6/10
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