Reviewer: SagarikaKhanna
Author: Abnegationbooklover
Title: Can't go back
Genre: Teen Fiction
Summary:
Trusting someone was the worst decision I made. Lilia Jennings is broken because of the options she made in her life but now can she change because of the people she meets or will they break her more than before.

My take on your story:
I will divide my review into three parts.
Summary: When I read the summary, I deduced that the plot looked interesting. The air of mystery surrounding the plot will always coerce the reader to open the book and read it. But I felt that the summary could be a bit more wordy. Here, I am not talking about the length but I am talking about the type of 'good words' used. Instead of 'options' you could have used 'choices' or 'paths'. The usage of such words will make the summary more eye-catching.

Cover: I feel the cover is not living up to the potential of the story. Your well worded story deserves a better cover. My suggestion to you is to take the advice of a graphic designer.

Review on the story content: The story potrays the angst of a typical teenager well. From the prologue, we can infer that the protagonist is your stereotypical teen. She is not good at making friends and envies her little sister. I feel that the character of the protagonist is sort of cliche. She is like every other teenager found in thousands of stories on Wattpad. But this is certainly not a bad thing. You could have given us some juicy tidbits about the character which would have spiced things up. This would set your character apart from the others. You could begin the prologue by showing that the protagonist is an old lady and is remembering her regrets and choices and how she wishes that she could go back in time to correct it. Alas, for her it is not possible. This would be in sync with your title- "Can't go back" .This writing technique always makes the story an interesting read. My next focus would be on the 'grammar' part. There are a quite few mistakes that can be corrected. To spot such mistakes, one needs to have a practiced eye and an amazing command over the English language. There are people with such attributes on Wattpad. You can go to @NewStoriesLibrary , a platform similar to Rambling Brooks that offers exemplary editing services. Overall, it is well-written and pleases the reader. I hope my review was helpful.

Rating: 7.25/10

PS: If you have the time, do review/vote for my story, My Inner Pursuit. Your feedback will be appreciated.