Title: Born With Blood

Author: @DivineReaderz

Genre: Mystery/ Thriller

Reviewer: Tethie

Summary:

A serial killer by night and a normal teenager by day.

Erica's the most successful criminal in the business. She's never missed an assignment, either at school or at work.

But what happens when she can't kill the most important assignment of her life?

And why does a secret organization want her blood?

What happens when the hunter becomes the prey?

And when pasts are revived and secrets are revealed, will Erica be able to protect those she loves?

Or will she let darkness drive her fate once again?

Review:

· Cover:

Alright, so the cover looks pretty fitting for the story. The red layer gives a hint to the story's plot, which has a lot to do with blood. However, it's hard to make out the title and the author because they both are kind of reddish. I would suggest changing the color of the title to a simple white, which would make it stand out more.

· Summary:

The grammar in the story summary is top. There are a lot of questions, which can be considered a good thing because it piques the reader's interest. However, I would suggest turning the questions into simple sentences. The last three questions are enough, whereas the first two would work better as a normal sentence.

· Story:

Alright, I do have to admit that when I started reading the book I thought that I wasn't going to like it much. I usually don't read those kinds of books, but decide to give it a go. And I have to say that I don't regret it. The story had me hooked from the first chapter. The plot line, the character, the grammar. Everything was on top. I loved how you threw in the cliffhangers and don't get me started on those twists of yours.

The story is written in the point of view and you write in different characters' POV. You are doing a great job with that and it's very easy to tell whose POV the reader is at. There is, however, one thing that slightly disturbed the reading. You mix in the thoughts of the character, which isn't a bad thing. It's quite entertaining to read actually, but every time such thoughts appear it gets confusing because the reader has to figure out first if the person said it out loud or only thought it. My suggestion to you would be to write these thoughts in italic letters. That way the reader can easier distinguish between the characters' thoughts and what they are actually saying.

To sum it up, I throughout enjoyed the book. It has a really unique story plot with characters that one can relate to (even if one of them is a killer). One thing that I love about the book is the Alley. You turned it into this living being that really sent the chills up my arm. Well done!

I wish you all the best for your book and I can't wait to see how things turn out for Erica and Ethan. (I first thought of them as a potential couple until the big reveal)

Rating: 9/10

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