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I just edited a story for HarleyNearLevi

The original was;
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My name is Light Yagami... and I'm pretty sure I'm a psychopath...

My life was simple, average, unnoticed. Until I met... it.
It told me I was destined for great things, and it was more than right.
It gave me this unique power to dispose of anyone instantly without a trace of evidence.
I met this girl, and I told her I loved her because I thought she'd be fun to kill.
Turned out she was just as crazy as I am. She became my lady, and my partner.
We ruled together, like kings. Using fear to build our power, to build our empire.
Until he appeared. He jumped into the picture uninvited and ruined everything. So I have to dispose of him too. But how?
He's smart, very smart. Any wrong move could give me away.
Soon. Very soon. I will take back what he took from me.
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And my version was;
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My name, Light Yagami and if I'm being honest with my self I'm almost certain I'm a going insane.

My life was once what most people would call average, unnoticed. Until it fell into my hands.

It told me I was destined to do great things, and it was more than right.

It gave me this unique power to dispose of any human life force instantly without a trace of evidence.
There was this girl I met, and I swore my powerful love to her because I was assured that she would be fun to torture mentally.

Though at first I was shocked for it seemed as though she was just as sociopathic as I.

She became mine, my intimate partner in crime.
We ruled together, like like royalty.

Spreading fear to build our power, to build our empire. Intimidating those who thought that they could change of hurt us. Until he appeared. He jumped into the picture uninvited and ruined everything. So now I will have to dispose of him too. But the one thing that tore me to say was that I wasn't sure how.

He was smart, very smart. One step out of place could give me away.
Soon. Very soon. I will take back what he took from me. He will perish in the hands of death itself for I, I am death and his blood will stain my hands. No matter what happens such an impotent fool could never do so much as damage a mind and soul as powerful as the one bared within me.
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