Today I will be reviewing 'Still life' by InsideSnake which is a tale about a girl who gets stuck between her real and afterlife! 

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Let's go!

○●○ C A S T ○●○

With Kriti being the main lead, and no male protogonist opposite her, I heart for the role you've given her!

Although, you've included Hollywood actors to play Gabe and Micheal, it's been done in a very good way as it suits the characters for who they're.

Kajol 's role I personally feel can be played by anyone, but this still depends as the story is still going on and we have more to know and see how strong her role is.

I love the casting very much, but have yet to see more of Shahrukh Khan's character, but what you've revealed about the character so far is interesting seeming he is very important in Kyra's (Sanon's) life. This is where we move on to the next section. 》•••

○●○ C H A R A C H T E R S ○●○

All the characters introduced and casted have a purpose which is a huge plus point! BALLE BALLE!

Which means the storyline has a initial plot that works around the characters!

Although characters are shown greatly in regards of the relationships they hold with each other, feelings and thoughts of the characters can be more detailed because they all have great potential!

○●○ S T O R Y L I N E ○●○

A Bollywood story, about a girl stuck between her real life and the afterlife, with two handsome angels, a past full of mysteries and secrets she's trying to figure out is one of the best plot ideas I have come accross! There's mystery, drama and suspense that keeps you interested all the way!

Overall, this storyline has great potential to be a great book if thought very well hoping to bring twists and turns that may not be expected.

○●○ W R I T I N G ○●○

Flow of the story is going perfectly! As a writer you know when what needs to be expressed depending on the situation which is great!

Perhaps it may be best, if more emotions and thoughts can be added just so we get a better intake on the characters, so chapter lengths can turn out to be slightly longer than they're.

Some scentances aren't full, or are misplaced but these are little errors that can occur and can be sorted, which is normal. Nothing major to worry about and can be resolved.

○●○ S U G G E S T I O N S ○●○

- I feel some chapters can be joined together to make one whole one. But, I only feel this way because the chapters feel slightly incomplete because of the lack of description I'm terms of feelings and thoughts. However, you can decide what's best for the story.

- Since I feel the book is more on the mystery/drama/thriller side being it's first genre than other genres, make sure the chapters ahead keep the readers interested through (which you're doing greatly so far!)

○●○ A U T H O R S  N O T E ○●○

I hope this helped you and the advice and points I have given (purely my opinion) will help develop the book.

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Until next time...

Byeeeeee

Yours truly, Sal